Monday, January 07, 2008

DAILY PLANET ADVENTURES #1

RAPIST STILL AT LARGE by Lois Lane


Hob's Bay- I am writing in the hopes that someone will read this and recognize that there still is the need for heroes.

Last night, a serialized rapist stalked and killed a young, seventeen-year old near Hob's Bay, also known by the locals as "Sucide Slum." The girl was walking past Eddie's Place, a well-known dance club in that district. There are reports that the unindentified girl made a 911 call to Metropolis police, and reported being stalked by a man who was hiding in the shadows.

The dispatcher, Erin Haiduk, reported that "The last thing I heard was the young girl screaming on the phone, 'He's right behind me!' The only thing I heard after was the distant sound of a woman yelling and a man yelling after her.'"

No information has been at press time as to the identity of the young girl. This marks the 7th rape victim in the Hob's Bay area, and the 3rd that resulted in a death. This has been in the last five weeks alone.

What is disturbing to note is that there are reports that several people witnessed the girl being chased by the man but did nothing. Police who interviewed the people found that none of them bothered to look and see what was happening and were preoccupied with getting into the club.

We must ask ourselves: are we too preoccupied to see what is going on? This city is in need of a hero, or rather heroes- people who will unselfishly act in a time of need.

I do not point the finger at anyone. I only ask if it there was a way this tragedy could have been prevented, simply by paying attention, by looking to see what was going on.

If anyone has any information on this case, please call Metropolis Police and let them know.

The fact remains that this man is still a fugitive, still on the loose. Metropolis' finest, including Inspector Henderson, told the press today: "We are looking at doing what we can to find this man. We are organizing a team under the direction of Dan Turpin to investigate into this matter."

The Metropolis police represent some of the finest men and women in this Country. They have been the true heroes of this city. We wish them the best in their search for this madman. Heroes like Inspector Henderson and Dan Turpin inspire us- hopefully, so that one day, we too will look ourselves at realize that there is more than just us- there is a whole world out there looking for heroes.

104 Comments:

Blogger Jason Major said...

Perry White writes:

Lois, where's that story you said you were going to have done for me?

11:02 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois Lane writes:

Right here, Chief! I think it has a good angle as well.

11:03 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Perry White writes:

Lois...what is this? Do you call this journalism?

11:03 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois Lane writes:

It's the truth, Perry. This city is looking for heroes. I was trying to inspire people.

11:04 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Perry White:

How? By insulting their intelligence? Don't you think they know mediocre writing when they see it?

Lois- I know you mean well, but if you want to be a great reporter- you have to have a great story.

I'm sorry, honey, but Ron Troupe wrote his angle on the story and it's better polished.

I need to have this story NOW- I don't have time for you to work on it.

11:06 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois Lane writes:

But, Perry, this is important! Someone should be doing something about this rapist.

11:06 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Perry White:

Okay, okay, you want to do something- then you do it. Investigate, find out the facts. Interview people- get your own hands dirty.

11:07 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois Lane writes:

Okay-right on it, chief.

11:08 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

NARRATOR ADVENTURES:

(Lois turns, runs to her desk, grabs her purse, gets ready to leave the Planet)

11:09 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

NARRATOR ADVENTURES:

(Lois turns, runs to her desk, grabs her purse, gets ready to leave the Planet)

11:09 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Perry White:

Hey! Hey! Hey! Where do you think you're going in such a hurry?

11:09 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois Lane:

Hob's Bay. Where do you think I was going?

11:10 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Perry White:

Not alone, you're not!

11:10 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois Lane:

Perry, I'm a big girl. I grew up an army brat. I can take care of myself.

11:11 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Perry White:

(concerned look on his face)

Lois...I know you want to be a superman, but you need to use your head. This rapist has already raped several girls and killed God knows how many others. I don't want to see you in tomorrow's obituary.

I want you to take someone with you.

11:13 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Perry White:

(concerned look on his face)

Lois...I know you want to be a superman, but you need to use your head. This rapist has already raped several girls and killed God knows how many others. I don't want to see you in tomorrow's obituary.

I want you to take someone with you.

11:13 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois Lane:

(Looks around, sees Jimmy getting some water at the water cooler, runs to Jimmy)

JIMMY! Get over here! (Grabs Jimmy by his shirt)

You're coming with me.

11:14 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Jimmy Olsen:

I am? Where?

11:14 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois Lane:

Hob's Bay. Big story. We're going to find that rapist that's been stalking young girls.

11:15 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Jimmy Olsen:

Are you sure, that sounds kind of dangerous?

11:15 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois Lane:

Perry, Jimmy's coming with me! It'll all be okay.

11:16 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Perry White:

Lois, Jimmy is just a kid...he's a rookie photographer, for crying out loud!

11:17 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois Lane:

Don't worry, chief, we'll be fine! Jimmy will be with me, and we'll call Inspector Henderson if something bad happens.

11:18 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Jimmy Olsen:

Nothing bad is going to happen, is it?

11:19 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois Lane:

No, no, of course not.

11:19 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Jimmy Olsen:

I mean, if anything does, I'll protect you, Miss Lane.

11:19 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Perry White:

(holding a pen, points it straight at Lois & Jimmy)

You too be careful. Don't make me regret this.

11:20 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois Lane:

You won't, chief!

11:21 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Perry White:

Stay out of trouble- and stop calling me chief!

11:21 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois Lane:

Right chief! Sorry..Perry. 'Bye!

11:21 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Perry White:

Why do I feel I'm going to regret this?

11:22 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

NARRATOR ADVNENTURES:

(Lois & Jimmy arrive in front of a trashy night-club called "Eddie's place." There are people lined up to get inside.

10:54 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Jimmy writes:

Hey, shouldn't we go there?

10:54 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois:

Not worth the time, Jimmy. I want to closer to the crime scene, see if there was anyone around who might have seen someone.

10:55 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

NARRATOR ADVENTURES:

(Lois & Jimmy pass a bar called "Ace O'Clubs" and go down the back alley next to the bar)

(There is a back door for the bar where the garbage is kept, lots of recycle boxes with bottles of beer around, as well as some leftover food)

(They walk past the backdoor, about 100 feet, to where the chalked lines of where the rape victim was found dead. Police have taped off the area. The alley goes down a little more ways. Lois looks up, notices there are no windows around)

10:59 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Jimmy:

What are looking for?

10:59 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois:

There are no windows around. That means no one would've seen anything.

(looks around the ground, at the garbage around, trying to find anything)

(She crosses the police line, looks on the ground for clues)

11:00 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Jimmy:

What are we looking for?

11:00 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois:

Anything the police might've missed.

11:00 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Narrator Adventures:

(Looks around, sees only little bits of garbage. He climbs over the police lines, looks around. Lois is on her hands and knees; picking up little pieces of trash, sees nothing; finally, she sighs, ready to give up; she stands back up)

11:02 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois:

Nothing. I guess the police found whatever they could already.

11:02 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Jimmy (takes a couple photos)

Amazing how quickly people forget about her.

11:03 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

NARRATOR ADVENTURES:

(The back door of the bar opens- a big man wearing a little brown hat, oversized shirt checkered shirt and throwing a bag of garbage outside comes out-it is Bibbo.)

11:04 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

BIBBO:

Hey, youze guys, what are you doing back there??

11:04 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Jimmy:

C'mon, Lois, we probably should go.

11:05 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois:
(to Jimmy)
Take it easy, Jimmy, it's just someone from the bar.

(speaking to Bibbo)

I'm Lois Lane, reporter from the Daily Planet, and this is Jimmy Olsen. We're doing some follow-up work on the rape victim that happened a couple days ago.

11:06 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Bibbo:

Youze shouldn't be here, miss Lane, this is a dangerous neighbourhood.

11:07 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois Lane:

Do you know anything about what happened the other night?

11:07 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Bibbo (Stracthes his head)

Yeah, yeah, I'm the guy who called the girl in. The name's Bibbo, I own this club.

But come inside, it's not right for a pretty lady like yourself to be out here. Dangerous people around here.

11:08 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Narrator Adventures:

(Jimmy & Lois go inside the back door of the pub- they pass through a kitchen into a little office that Bibbo has. It has a small table and a couple chairs. As well as a fridge Bibbo motions to the chairs for them to sit down)

11:10 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Bibbo:

Sit, sit. (he goes to the fridge, it is full of beer)

You guys want a brewski?

11:10 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Jimmy:

I'm fine, thanks.

11:11 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois:

Maybe later.

11:11 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Bibbo: (shrugs his shoulders)

Okay..it's your loss.

(He pulls out two bottles for himself then sits down.)

11:11 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Bibbo:

Now, as I was saying...

11:12 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Narrator Adventures:

(He takes a chug of his drink, Lois & Jimmy watch as he drinks the whole bottle in practically one big gulp; then burps)

11:12 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Bibbo:

Burp! * Sorry about that.

Now, about your lady. Yeah, I wuz taking some trash out in the back when I looked outside and saw the lady in the back. I checked to see if she was alright but she was dead already. Poor lady- did you know she was left half-naked? I put my coat on her to cover her a bit, the lady deserves SOME respect' afta all that, then I went inside and called the cops.

7:57 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois:

Did you know her at all?

7:58 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Bibbo:

Kinda, actually. I remember seeing her come to the club with a couple o' dopes before, trying to get into the club. But it was obvious she was underage. It's the school system, I'm telling you- what do they teach these kids anyways? Teach them things I never used- like math and poetry- do you think i use those kinds of things in my kind of work? I'm sorry, I'm ranting.
(takes another chug of beer)
Anyways,yeah, I saw her a couple o' times, I think.

8:01 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois:

What about the guys who with her, any ideas about them?

8:01 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Bibbo:

Ah, a billion customers come into this joint now and then, I don't remember them all. I kinda remember she had like three or four guys she was with, I think a couple other chicks as well.

Let me think for a second....
(goes to fridge, takes out some old whisky)
Ah, some o' the good stuff. This oughta jog my memory. (takes a chug)

Ah, good stuff.

(thinks for a second, then sits down)

Yeah, now that I think of it- one of the guys comes here often- stupid kid, likes to get himself into trouble- name's Buddy something-or-other.

(gets up) Here, come with me to the pub, we'll see if he's causing any trouble tonight.

8:04 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

NARRATOR ADVENTURES:

(They walk into the pub, two guys are fighting with each other, hitting each other with beer bottles smashing on their heads, a bunch of people are talking to each other, a bunch of ladies talking with some guys)

(Bibbo walks towards the two guys fighting each other)

8:06 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Bibbo:

Hey, hey! Enough of that, or I'll throw your butts out of here! Be good, we got company today.

(they stop fighting, one guy just grabs his jacket and leaves the pub)

Sorry you had to see that. Charles (motions to a young, 30-year old football player with dark hair, he's the bartender)
Charles, what am I paying you for?
you're supposed to look out for trouble like that!

(motions to Lois)

Sorry, you had to see that.

(Bibbo catches the eye of Buddy, a 22-year old punk kid with earrings, tatoos, dark black hair and a cheap leather jacket on.)

8:10 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Bibbo:

Hey, you! Buddy, someone hear to see you!

8:10 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Buddy:

(looks at Lois, growls)

Grrowlll....purfect. You startin' to bring out the ladies for entertainment, Buddy.

8:11 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Bibbo:

Watch your mouth, young man (raises his fist)or I'll make sure you don't talk for a month.

8:12 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Buddy (trying not to look afraid)

Sorry, Bibbo. Lady.

(He takes another swug of beer)

So what can I do for you?

8:12 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois:

My name's Lois Lane, I'm a reporter for the Daily Planet. I was wondering if you could tell me about your girlfriend?

8:13 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Buddy:

Yeah, which one? (laughs, chugs a beer)

8:14 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois:

(a little annoyed)

The dead one.

8:14 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Buddy:

(stops in his tracks)

I didn't do it.

8:16 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois:

I never said you did. Listen, I'm not here to accuse you- I just want to find out who's doing this?

8:17 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Buddy:

Hey, Babe, you're hot, and maybe you think you're all that and a bag of chips- but you don't really want to look into this.

You look into this, you'll be his next victim.

8:17 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois:

Is that a threat?

8:18 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Buddy:

(shakes his head)

No, just a cleaver warning. Like, I said - I didn't do it- but you don't want to mess with who did.

8:18 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois:

Tell us something- if she was your friend- give us something.

8:19 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Buddy: (considers)

Okay. Her name is Kristin Mack. She was a friend of mine, not a girlfriend, but a friend of a friend.

I don't know who did this, but I have an idea.

8:21 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois:

Who?

8:21 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Buddy:

Listen, I'll point you in the right direction, but I want your promise my name doesn't get mentioned. You didn't hear this from me.

8:22 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois:

Okay, you have my word. Now talk.

8:22 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Buddy:

Kristin liked to take that "New World" drug everyone's talking about. It's a drug that like 2000 times better than coke. Me and her had a few times. But she was broke, she needed more. She had gone to get some more, but had stumbled onto a meeting-something about being in the wrong place at the wrong time.

She called me on her cell, but was cut off. The guy was chasing her.

8:26 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois:

You're saying the rape was not an accident?

8:27 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Buddy:

I'm just saying what I hear, is all. I think she uncovered something over her head- this rapist is just merely a cover to keep things quiet. The rapist is just some pervert who likes to get his jollies before making the kill.

8:29 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Jimmy:

If he's a cover, then for what?

9:29 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Buddy: (looks around, makes sure no one's listening)

(whispering) Intergang.

(he gets nervous, then takes off)

Listen, I got to go. I'll helped you enough. (takes off)

9:31 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois:

Wait! Come back!

(she and Jimmy run after him, but he's gone by the time they get out the door)

(seeing they lost him, they go back inside to see Bibbo.)

9:32 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois:

Bibbo, you ever hear of Intergang?

9:32 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Bibbo:

Inter-what's now?

9:32 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Jimmy:

Intergang. He said that intergang is behind this.

9:33 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Bibbo:

Uh..let me think about this...(take a chug of beer).

Charlie, grab me a '49! (Charles grabs him a whiskey from 1949- He takes a good long chug)

Ah, nothing like a '49 to jog the memory.

Where were we? Oh yeah, intergang. Yeah, I've heard mumblings in the neighborhood. Some kind of underground crime organization.

9:34 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Jimmy:

Do the cops know anything about them?

9:35 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Bibbo:

(nods head, 'no')

"Nah, I don't think so- except maybe the name, is all. They can't prove Intergang even exists."

9:35 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Jimmy:

What do they have to do with the 17-year old girl?

9:36 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Bibbo:

Probably drugs, I would think. That new world drug they'm taking- I caught a dope trying to sell that dope in her- well, i'll tell ya, that guy had to get himself some crutches after I got ahold o' him.

9:37 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois:

(pulls out a pad of paper, uses a pen; writes her name and cell on the paper)

Thanks, Bibbo. If you have any more information for us, just give us a call, okay?

9:38 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Bibbo:

No problem, sweetheart.

9:38 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

NARRATOR ADVENTURES:

(Lois & Jimmy walk out of the pub, heading out to where Lois has parked her car)

10:56 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Jimmy:

So, what do you think of what Buddy told us?

10:57 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois:

I don't know, Jimmy. I think he might be right about his girlfriend finding out more then she should know, but I don't think that's what got her killed.

10:58 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Jimmy:

Why's that?

10:58 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois:

Call it reporter's instinct. Think about it- if you're Intergang, to hire a RAPIST to kill a girl, which would lead to suscipion and investigation?

I think what happened is that she probably was running away and found herself in the wrong part of town.

So, Jimmy, my theory is this- there are two stories here- the first is obviously this rapist. But we've uncovered a bigger story- this crime organization called Intergang.

11:00 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Jimmy:

So, where do we go from here?

11:00 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

Lois:

Let's start with the rapist- he's the immediate threat. Intergang is going to take more digging into.

I think it's time to go to police headquarters, see if they have anything that can help us.

11:01 AM  
Blogger Jason Major said...

NARRATOR Adventures:

END OF CHAPTER ONE.

6:23 PM  

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